Just wrote first love song is it alright?

normally not my thing but i thought id try a happy song for a change





p.s. sorry if this ruins the song but essentially the whole thing is about sex


the gathering storm in the 5th verse is her orgasm and the last two verses are the lying in bed afterwards





please for the love of god dont ask what inspired this











scratch


and bite


and claw your way


inside of me





kick


and fight


draw your battle lines


in the sand





submit me to your command x 2





burn


like the fire


like the embers


that blaze in your eyes





you rise


like the sun


you could never deny


what you are





the midnight star





scream out the name of your lover


from the depths of the gathering storm


let the lightning and thunder surround you


grasp the rose by the thorn





breathe


be still


and calm as the wind


in the east





sleep


and dream


you could never be less


than you are





my morning star

Just wrote first love song is it alright?
I'm not sure about your relationship but love doesn't necessarily have to do with sex.